I very interested in the story . I believe this story has a lot of potential and I love the fact that the first pov is not the main character but rather someone who is watching the mc. I look forward to the rest of the story.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
love it so far, would like if you change the writing style of the conversationts.
Written at chapter 5. I'm really enjoying this story, but it has a few problems, mainly just some bad grammar or spelling. Other than that, I loved it. WQ 3 SD 5 CD 4 US 3 WB 2
