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It seems like a good book but can you work on the grammar, and to place commas, periods, and stuff like that. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________
The story sounds interesting and has a lot of promising potential. I don't know how often they'll post. I'm looking forward to the coming chapters. I'll leave it 3 stars until more comes out. Thx for the good reads keep up the worx.
Autor continúa la historia tiene potencial no dejes que se desperdicie. Así que por el amor a todo los fanfic que tienes potencial continúa escribiendo
