Personally, I would have to say that I have found this story to be really enjoyable, and the translation to be top Notch by the translator. And by no means never feels like it has been machine translated, and I feel like the translator goes out of his way to make sure everything is clear, flowing, and easy to understand.
The actual story itself is very entertaining, the game elements, not particularly strong with other players at the moment, although they do appear, and he definitely gets strong fast, but I also like that he is creative with his abilities. I really think this story is worth giving it a try since it is one of the more enjoyable, one piece of stories I have come across.