I think you should rewrite this whole story; it lacks a hook to keep people reading. You haven't changed Sakura's personality, even though they share the same body and have known each other for a long time. She's the same Sakura from the canon. You should change the body-sharing thing; it's a stupid idea. I think it's the most foolish idea I have ever seen. Sorry to be rude, but it is. The MC is meant to be smart, but he doesn't act like it. Rather than him sharing bodies with her, why didn't you make him her twin? It's so stupid.do not delete my review because im telling the truth