Ok, the actual fic is pretty good. Not really five star worthy, but not a lot of Webnovel fics are in my eyes. The main thing that really irritates me though is the freaking summary. The worst kind of summary are those ones that are basically tags in and of themselves or completely incomprehensible. This is a runner up to that position though. Don't use 'imaginative' and 'enigmatic' to describe your own fic, let the readers decide that on their own (if it, they will know). The summary should give a brief glimpse into the story along with a hint of the tone, leave off the excessive adjectives. They detract more than they provide.
