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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Stormy Sea

Aztec_Azazel
Aztec_AzazelLv13Aztec_Azazel

just an advice, change the name its overused almost every one piece fanfic the MC's name is something D something, dont even know the meaning of the letter

Armdi
ArmdiAuthorArmdi

That is a good idea, I was thinking the same, but in my opinion D also means a good genetic, so it's easier to show why your MC gets stronger as other main characters as well (and it's also part of Mark's background and a reason for him in future to make any decisions. I was going to hide his full name for a long time, so no one knows about it, and then he finds out the meaning of it while exploring the world). But thanks for your comment, I will rethink if I can change something and maybe trying not to make so obvious things.

Armdi
ArmdiAuthorArmdi

Hello, So here is my first fanfiction and a first chapter of it. Also this chapter has more words, than any essee I have written in school or university. English is my second language, I still wonder why I picked english for my first fanfic... And I hope you enjoy😁 P.s. All pictures of mc or world I get through AI, so I hope not to get any copyright issues