Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Stormy Sea

Hello, So here is my first fanfiction and a first chapter of it. Also this chapter has more words, than any essee I have written in school or university. English is my second language, I still wonder why I picked english for my first fanfic... And I hope you enjoy😁 P.s. All pictures of mc or world I get through AI, so I hope not to get any copyright issues