Author here with the usual 5 star rating. Let me get this straight, this is a harem fic, so, don't you dare spam comments about if it's harem or not. I will make character rooster as always and harem members will be added in due time. Let me know if you have any questions or if you have found any mistakes. Thank you.
I pray to God that this Batman/Bruce Wayne is not 'No killing' Follower. if he's no killing rule follower I'll leave immediately.
I hope that this Bruce Wayne will be a true hero, not some anti-hero nonsense. I miss seeing characters who are selfless and righteous. Nowadays, people are so edgy and always want to kill others. He has what it takes to be a hero too; he saved his last world by sacrificing his life, after all. I'll probably lose interest if it's another edgy character who wants to kill everyone.
Promising start for a harem-themed Batman fanfic. Fans anticipate a unique twist on the character, hoping for a deviation from the 'no killing' rule. Looking forward to more chapters and updates. Good luck, author!
Personally dropped after chap 9 Biggest issue I have is you give the MC tony starks intelligence and experience AND DID NOTHING WITH IT. He twisted fate with nothing more than a warning and (the equivalent) of a concealed dart gun/sling shot because both of those could have replaced the watch and changed nothing. He didn't give his family blueprints for better defense, didn't stop his family from walking into a trap (why take a risk you can just avoid?) can't use the excuse "hes in a childs body he doesn't have full ability yet" BECAUSE HE MADE A BLUEPRINT FOR A SUPER CAR AT 3 y/o I don't mind the method used for the time skip but I greatly dislike the way you resolved it its like you had 3 origin stories and smashed the together
Righting qualities good, but very short chapters. Just didn't have any pull to read. Very mundane.
You my brother are at the forefront of the harem sect you have respect may the world know harem 🙌😊also recommendations for harem : wonder woman, Talia ul ghoul, catwoman, raven, supergirl, power girl, Barbara, starfire, Vicki vale.
can't wait to see how this goes cause they are quite similar characters with similar backgrounds I just hope u remember that Batman is a genius in his own right and has built some amazing tech even if he mainly focuses on tools
It was good story, but moment he start using to much Magic ring stuff , it become dull with distasteful. Batman is on the top for physical, excellent fights, strategies and strong will and mind ,while being of no magic and other stuff ,with Tony Stark mind he should have no need for any of these parlours trick.
Support. Even though its just stating, its already very entertaining to read. Give it a chance.
This certainly has a lot of potential, hope you keep updating and giving us such chapters. Can't wait to see how the story will unfold in the future. Just please don't drop it in the middle.
I am liking it very much. keep the chapters rolling👍🙂
After reading 30 chs it's review time. Writing quality is good, regular readers won't even notice any mistakes. Updates are stable and regular and the author informs us in case of late updates. Story development is just great. A bit slow, but hey, as long as the plot is good I have no problem. Characters looks lively and the best of all is no rushed harem where mc just goes having segs and everyone is just falling for mc.
The story provides an intriguing and innovative approach to the superhero universe, blending familiar elements from Marvel and DC. The narrative begins with an exciting twist by transferring the protagonist, Jack, from the skin of Tony Stark to that of Bruce Wayne, adding an additional layer of complexity to the story. The proposed fusion between Batman and Iron Man promises a unique approach to the narrative, exploring the creative potential of uniting two comic book icons. The decision to introduce advanced technology into a more primitive universe creates a fascinating dynamic but also poses significant narrative challenges. Exploring Jack's intact memories adds psychological depth to the story, offering opportunities for reflection on identity and purpose. However, striking a balance between Batman's darker narrative and Iron Man's charismatic personality may prove to be a challenge.
I really like DC and Marvel FanFiction, this year is the year of Batman and Spider-Man. I've only read works about them and I'll tell you, yours is great, for now. P.S: Why doesn't anyone write one about Captain America or Víctor Van Doo, even Mr. Fantastic would be cool.
A good story so far. The progression seems great and updates are plenty. I like the fact that although its a harem fiction there is no mindless harem and girls falling over MC without any cause. And haven't noticed any severe grammatical errors. Overall a nice read. But, I still think Quirk in Multiverse is your best work so far.
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Понравилась идея и исполнение не подкачало. Герой сильный, но не чрезмерно. Интересно будет взглянуть на будущие события, учитывая новые переменные.
That's really a good one. I enjoyed reading it. Can't read to read more. Even i write if you like you can check it out. Do you have a editor as you wrote it very well
good story. but can u plz update the chapters me kinda waiting for them .have already read 3-4 times.
