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The prolog is really good. I think I could take some note for my own learning. You did well on presented the scenario and scenes.
No, I don't if there are many visitors (If not, I try moving to Munpia instead). I've made logline, plotline, outline and research for 6 months and compiled everything by getting 5 volumes of stories. I've gotten an illustrator to spend my money for promotion.
BlueJeans:Me too. Also it seem you did update your chapter in schedule. It definitely would attract more traffic to your novel. I hope more reader who enjoy type of genre like ORV would find this. Please don't drop this or disappear :(It sad because a lot of book I used to follow are gone. I will follow the story slowly👍