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The prolog is really good. I think I could take some note for my own learning. You did well on presented the scenario and scenes.
I wrote this because I was inspired by everything you mentioned. Moreover, I've read ORV all the way through (even I failed to get a pre-order slot for the physical novel last month), and I've finished reading TCF, just reading TLOH which is a continuation of TCF. For S Class I'm just following the manhwa. I love Korean novel so much :')
BlueJeans:I like the writing. I'm a newbie author and write similiar genre as you. I think I could learn more as I dive in into your story. The prolog is really interesting, and you know since I also love type of novel like ORV, TCF, and S Class. It's really refreshing to see similiar type of book. As you might know, Harem is still the top genre in this platform. So yeah, finding this type of book is a bit difficult.