Naruto-Enigma of Tsukirai Hatake

Consider this a private message I wrote to the author. I think you're having some trouble developing the story. The main focus of the novel is on Kakashi's brother. Being Kakashi's brother creates a butterfly effect. literally the future changes almost completely. But we do not see the mc, we only see the events going on around us. And these events are not things that the MC does, but things that happen in the main manga. The author just detailed these. if the. It would be okay if I thought that someone who had already watched or read Naruto would read this novel, but I don't think so. You should not distract the reader, especially in the early chapters.

too much yap in filler walls of text that repeat in essence the same nonsense feels like it was written by an amateur poet

Greetings, dear readers!Allow me to introduce you to "Enigma of Tsukirai Hatake." Tsukirai's journey has only just begun, and trust me, there's much more to his story than meets the eye.As you follow Tsukirai's transformation, you'll uncover a world of hidden depths, unique characters, and unexpected twists. But here's the catch - just like life itself, not everything is as straightforward as it seems.I won't give away the surprises, but I promise you this: there are mysteries awaiting you, ready to unravel. Join Tsukirai as he navigates this enigmatic world, and remember, your thoughts and questions are always valued in the comments section.Get ready for a journey filled with curiosity, wonder, and a touch of the unknown.Happy reading!Yours in mystery,PURPLE 🟣 SPLINTER.

Great world building🫡🫡, but if you focus largely on it and dont the show the mc part in the story, it quickly gets repetitive.

hey, updating and giving new review after I read last 20 chapters, I like the pace and story development now, it's steady nor fast nor slow. mostly i like the character development going through of all the characters, and how they are not just fillers and have personality and how mc's character and personality are showing out . good work, will keep reading for now, waiting for more chapters. P.S - please don't make it a harem.

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hey author, I really liked the concept, but my main issue is I don't understand the mc's character. I don't mind if story has alot of pov etc but the mc's ambition, goals and his personality is at all not clear. It's very ambiguous right now, and considering its transmigration, mc personality should be much more evolved right, I mean at least give us an pov regarding this. Plus the story is being a little too repatative for me, and no story and plot development but that may be you just setting the groundwork so I am fine with it. But please try to focus a little more on mc and less his personality a little bit.

Either ai or the author really likes poetry. Tried going further, but the repetitive descriptions killed it for me.