While I haven't been on WN that long, this story feels like it has a great deal of potential especially for its genre. Writing wise I think it would benefit from a proofread, not bad enough to take away from the story, but it is noticable in some places. Character dDesign / Introduction of those characters as of Ch. 18, can be improved mostly just setting up the character description before the introduction. But the story is developing at a decent pace, the updates are substantial, world building is better than most of the stories I've read in this genre. I look forward to catching up and seeing how the author grows.
