Comments of chapter undefined of Focused Fire (ATLA)
Focused Fire (ATLA)
arg3nt
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I just dont understand harems. They are so incredibly difficult to do well, actually, just romance in general is already hard to do and for once the author did a great job with the romance. Nothing out of left field, steady progress and then it finally happened. dont get me wrong, i like suki, i prefer her more than azula but it just doesnt feel right
I’m not exactly sure how the current relationships formed other azula and xing but before he rewrote it ty lee sort of ntr azula and she kind of forced him to accept her or they break up. Fans were not happy because like you said, ty lee and xing practically had no relationship
Alex_Silva_0378:What I feel was missing to make it perfect, would have been the interconnection, it should have shown xing having more interactions and affinity with suki and azula having reflected and developed her relationship with suki more after ty lee was removed, only then would it have made sense for them to want to include her Another thing, ty lee and xing have NEVER talked, ty lee calls him hot, but that's it, it seems like jokes to provoke blue and in the end she's in the harem and has a child with him. This defect isn't so great because they finish the work with her alone, she doesn't enter the harem until years and years later off-screen, so you can justify an eventual rapprochement.
Uh i don’t Like this. This type of forced harem is not my cup of tea. I would prefer if it only be no harem, so just Azula and Xing, not Ty Lee and Sukiyaki who would join them. The Relationship between Azula and Xing is very well written and would suck to see it all go down the drain.
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arg3nt
Well yeah, could’ve done it WAAAAY better but with how things turned out, this forceful harem with no substance is better than our MC getting cucked again lol even though it makes no sense and it seems like azula is now the MC of the story sence the OG MC is a side character now lol author lost interest in this story when he couldn’t make it NTR lol 😂
