Comments of chapter undefined of Focused Fire (ATLA)
Focused Fire (ATLA)
arg3nt
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I just dont understand harems. They are so incredibly difficult to do well, actually, just romance in general is already hard to do and for once the author did a great job with the romance. Nothing out of left field, steady progress and then it finally happened. dont get me wrong, i like suki, i prefer her more than azula but it just doesnt feel right
Tbh, I’m not exactly sure what happened. I never finished this novel, also, the author actually went back and rewrote how the harem formed because there was so much backlash. I mean literally, the rating went from a 4.93 with over 100chs in to a high 2. I kid you not he almost dropped the novel from the hate
Alex_Silva_0378:I think there was a lack of basis for Azula's change of opinion, before she set a very strong limit, showing herself possessive, now she just lets it? I think we needed Azula's POV before this conversation
Well yeah, could’ve done it WAAAAY better but with how things turned out, this forceful harem with no substance is better than our MC getting cucked again lol even though it makes no sense and it seems like azula is now the MC of the story sence the OG MC is a side character now lol author lost interest in this story when he couldn’t make it NTR lol 😂
