Overall, the story started off very well, but as the story went on, you could see the author's lack of sense of direction. He gave the protagonist a system only to take it away later, what's the reason? There is no logical explanation...
Another point here that highlights this is that there has been a huge development in the system and its functions of 'picking up' girls. Anyway, apart from the story's lack of direction, there is the protagonist's unconsciousness. He doesn't have the same depth as all the other characters.
If he is going to read it, he reads it at his own risk. But I don't recommend it, as it will waste valuable time that you could spend on better stories or your personal life.