I like how the story develops, I hope you can continue writing more chapters. The story moves at a good pace, even if it's only 9 chapters, the one year time jump didn't feel forced.
A good slice of life fanfic. Has a lot of potential. But I'd like if the author simply the MC's magic ability and connect it with chakra will make it more interesting , for me at least. Overall a good fanfic, with potential. Keep it up.
