Star Wars: General

This is a rewrite version of my previous one, I will just be doing some slight changes… Well I don’t like talking much, but if you have any questions, please let me know! Enjoy!, Luxuriant~

I’m so glad you’re picking this fanfic back up I really enjoyed it. Thank you author-San!

I love it, just curious about the love intrerest.

currently nine chapters were released and until this point the story is quite enjoyable with a detailed background .

Absolutely amazing book, massive improvement from the rewrite and a very entertaining book with a clone as the mc and being very op with his future knowledge. Give it a read!

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really looking forward to more of this story, it's so good

This novel although only has a few chaps out so far is amazing how the mc is a clone but also use the force and knows the future in excited to see where this goes!

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I've been waiting for this re-write for ages and im glad to say i wasnt disapointed with my wait. An amazing OC MC who isnt immediatly the best force user simply for being reborn, he has military training and uses it well to let the jedi know whos better at what he does. Cant wait to read more and see what you've got instore for us, keep up the amazing work.

this is for good hopefully, hopefully it has romance and harem and that the romance is not very slow,, zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

This is a cold review, meaning I have not finished reading all available chapters, I'm currently done with chapter 10. Will update as needed. The overall reading experience is okay. I can parse it fine, with no unpassable grammar mistakes, but the way it's written is kind of mediocre. Needs a lot of polish, I guess. The story seems low effort so far, mostly because characters with established traits bend to make space to "show how persuasive and competent" the main character is. Overall I'm considering this to be a low-effort wish fulfillment shonen story. But I have to articulate this, the novel is free of charge, so I have no idea how much time the writer has or how much interest he has invested in this novel, namely if its a passion project, something to pass the time or if he's trying to write something good.

I like this Rewrite ...... . .............

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Buen comienzo pero con fallas obvias como no tiene sentido que sidous no lo entrene el las habilidades del lado oscuro segundo en star wars usar el lado oscuro es usar emociones negativas con la fuerza i un jedi o otro usario de del la fuerza depende de lo opuesto que en esencia es autocontrol de tus emociones no necesariamente tiene que ignorar eso esta basado en el budismo que se trata de alcanzar la felicidad de uno mismo a. Traves de la meditacion i la comprension de uno mismo , asi lo quiso george lucas segundo problema saber usar ninguna forma de combate de luz i luchar con puro instinto i ni mencionar los midiclorianos que representa la velocidad de aprendizaje físico i su conexión con la fuerza por cierto yoda posee 19 mil midiclorian i anakin 25 mil obi wan 15 windu 18.900 los midiclorians son como el talento físico i lo fuerte que es tu conexión con la fuerza al pero eso no significa que no puede ser poderoso pero que le tomará mucho entrenamiento para llegar a ser muy poderoso pero uno tiene que alinearse con un aspecto de la fuerza el lado oscuro vuelve a sus usuarios crueles egoístas malvados hasta el punto de matar a sus seres queridos i personas inocentes por poder ya que se alimenta de las deshinibiciones de la moral i la humanidad cuanto más sufrimiento.odio ira sienta i cause el usuario más fuerte será su conexión con el lado oscuro de la fuerza darth sidious describió el lado oscuro como una llama que tiene que ser alimentada o sino destruye a sus usuarios mientras que el lado luminoso mientras meditar i entrenar busque alcanzar la paz interior como hizo obiwan el la serie kenobi más fuerte será tu conexión co el lado luminoso de la fuerza

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honestly I would not read from this author he has a tendency to drop books and not finish them or try's to rewrite them and still not finish them