The premise of the novel seems interesting, it gives us much more to think about when you go inside the first chapter, there are many things that would give us the question as to who is that AI, and there's also the plot that seems to divulge more information about the world that makes it attracting, though I would suggest to cut down some paragraphs and make them a bit shorter. But overall, this is an interesting start, this would be a good story to follow.
