bro u still alive? It has the potential of a good fic, but it has a severe case of no chapters.
Overall very good story so far, I really like the premise and the way your writing it, I can only hope you haven’t dropped it since its been a while since the last update.
This a good book so far I see nothing wrong with it!!
with only 3 chapters, I cannot yet pass judgement. I can however, say that I want more.
