EliJahChainsaw
I don't know if it helps you but your story has little spelling mistakes that aren't bad but you could edit them with grammarly or whatever it's called before you upload your chapters
EliJahChainsaw:yeah.. english is not my first language, but i plan on using grammar checkers soon.. i just wanted to practice for a bit to get better, rather than getting used to grammar checkers. but it seems that i have to since people are starting to notice huhu