Comments of chapter undefined of I'll Surpass The MC
I'll Surpass The MC
Anvelope
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I didn't read today's chapters(thank you for the good food) until after seeing the announcement you posted in discord so figured I might as well put something here. I think these were some good chapters, I don't know if I'd call it your best chapters or my favorites, but definitely very decidedly good, were there things that were unexpected or caught me off guard? Yes, but not that I'd say didn't make sense, Virala being able to imitate Brangera well enough to fool Yarsha is surprising, considering how sharp she is, but considering he'd entered the life stage for a while, and got the resulting perfect memory(even if only temporarily since he's no longer life stage), him being able to use the portrayal and information on the boar king from Sumatra Chronicles, while leaning on his lingering aura to reinforce it makes sense, him suddenly seeming to have developed a conscience and deciding to leave the emperor's body for Ganala? Very unexpected, but not unreasonable, holding onto it brings him no benefit, and potentially active detriment if he's unlucky, he can't use it, he's pulled just about everything of value to himself out of it, better to give it to someone else for potential profit later on, its less matter of conscience and more one of convenience, so its not like there are any character breaking actions or mistakes, most the comments complaining seem to be about pacing or focus, namely that its been focusing on the brimgan groups a lot for a while, and we haven't heard from the others in a while, which I get, but that really seems kinda like a nonfactor, if you were gonna shift back over to their point of view I imagine you would've done that during the 6 year time skip, but that was like 8 chapters ago and since you didn't I imagine you have your reasons, Its just them being impatient to get back yo their favorite character. Only valid complaint I could see anyone posing would be editing/typos, but this is privilege, the unedited secret stash of chapters, not to mention any typos are very minor. All in all, these are some very good chapters Anvelope, thank you for providing them
okey I'm out he rly is only focusing on inala and virala nothing about resha and the other main chars the title isn't even correct anymore and to make Virala the main antagonist and constantly give him dumb buffs like that make it seem like that he is the only one other besides inala that is important the thing started good but turned worse. if you look into it better the 6 dudes only read a book about Sumatra and nothing more but they are better then evreryone else
