Hi! I’m leaving this review since I wanted to point out a few things I liked about this novel.
I really like the world-building and lore, especially because it reminds me of historical times in real life.
However, as a reader, I need more background on the different “Sects” since they were introduced right into the novel without any explanation. World-building needs further elaboration especially on the functions of the places or groups mentioned which is what this novel lacks for some reason.
Overall, I really like the theme of this story. Eastern Fantasy is a really great genre to explore, and your story has potential. Please keep writing!