Comments of chapter undefined of Twilight: The Heavenly Demon
Twilight: The Heavenly Demon
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another cringe MC this gives a crack-fic vibe, i'll see the next chp and then if it's not good i'll just stop reading from there
bad character dev? no no no my friend you're being generous how can it have bad character dev when it doesn't even have one!, it didn't have development it's like reading a cardboard character, its personality is literally every single character out there except it didn't develop it is just that a thing and "it" not a he a copy paste of every crack fic character
MeepsNewGroove:So, because the MC who got stupidly overpowered, took magical pills on the daily, alongside other mind, soul, and other body f*ckery and didn’t change is somehow bad character dev? We don’t even know MCs original personality and MC clearly keeps certain traits from the Murim realm. I could probably be reading your message wrong and if I do mb
heavenly demon X romance music....yup what a great combination the bloodied and strongest ddemon s gonna sing to make money...he can make at least x5 of that if only he did some mercenery jobs for multiple times and there's infinite possibilieties with his power yet u choose one of the cringiest thing for a demon like him
