Comments of chapter undefined of I Hacked the Damned System

I’m disliking this book more and more. Everything is just slightly odd enough that my level of irritation keeps growing. It’s interesting enough to keep reading for now in hopes of improvement. I’m trying to figure what’s irritating me. Words in the wrong order, weird conversations and attitudes, abrupt scene changes, it jumps all over the place, time skips in places where I think it would be better to have more story. I’m going to take a break and try another day incase it’s my mood.

Thx for the chapter

Now it turns out that they have sponsors as in "omniscient reader", but in a poorly written version.....bye

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola