DunnoDK
Thanks for the Chapter! I wonder what you plan on doing with Black Flame being separate from Shi Feng. Some of the stuff here is giving me bad vibes and I don’t know if that’ll end up being too cliche or not. You’ve been doing great with writing all this so I’ll just have to keep reading. See you in the next one.
in this chapter, when Rouxi and Black Flame talk. I felt a little worried because Black Flame had been acting abnormally for a while. I mean, what was the meaning of the cold light emitted by Black Flame's eyes when he was rejected by Rouxi? I hope this is just my imagination, otherwise, this might be the start of a bloody plot between Feng and Black Flame. and to be honest, I don't like this plot idea.