Don't waste your time on this bs fic cuz it feels like it's prolly written by a 14yo with a mommy kink who wants to babysit asta and he's the same height as asta with no impact on the story...
Mommy
plsssßssss continue ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
The MC character is a momma’s boy that gets angry at noise and can’t control his emotions.
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At first I was about to give this a low star rating but my decision change when I read a certain chapter man even though the as people hating o nthis I surely believe this fanfiction is probably one of the Best Ive read sofar the creativity is on whoel new level Writing Quality 4.5Story development 5.0Character Design 4.5Updating stability 4.5World background 5.0thats all I can say in this honest review
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You got mommy issues, little guy? Don’t worry, I’m sure her boyfriend she abandoned you to be with is taking care of her.
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Please continue this!!!! Im waiting for neXy chapter🙏🏻🙏🏻
very good 👍😊 💯 i like the story of asher and his background with elf parents
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Enjoying it so far just a few minor things I don't like. First is that the author goes little into what we have already seen in cannon a little to much. This is fine but I prefer when authors skim quickly through this or give a summary. Basically I want the author to focus more on the MC then on Yuno and Asta. One thing I am confused about is how the MC knows Asta has anti-magic? I get that he watched him use it but I don't believe it's that obvious is it? Anyways the novel is fun. I like the way the MC acts and that it's a non harem. I support Nero being the love interest. Hope you don't drop this novel anytime soon Author!
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Good so far. Nothing bad. Just more interested in seeing how MC would fare in a big fight, which is coming soon I think. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really enjoy the story. Hope to read more...................................................................................
