pretty good, but when his sword was commissioned the blacksmith asked "what type of sword do you use." MC said "wakizashi because it matches my size." make sense so far, but the blacksmith made a wakizashi over a few years(i think) when it would make sense for the MC to be using a katana to match his size. dude made a supreme grade sword even though it would make sense for the MC to not use that type of sword anymore.
this just ruined it for me along with spelling and grammar mistakes as well as you swapping " and ' making it 'talking' and "thoughts"