In Another World With My Smartphone(Fanfic)

How can someone be so shameless to give his own novel a five star review?

THE MC ISN'T A GOOD PERSON!! If you are here for some good protagonist this isn't for you.

There was potential but the author completely killed it not only with the character but the story itself

Really good OC who not trying to suck up to the main characters. I like the personality of the Alex and him not half assing thing or just go with the . definitely a good read in my list.

It was so enjoyable before the author decided to give guns to his army. WHY bring guns to a Magic world? If it was just for the Frame Gears I'd be fine, I mean I enjoyed Kinghts&Magic. But no, author just destroyed what made Fantasy Worlds so great.

please dont drop.the story is great.keep it up.

story is good plz don't drop .........,..

It's a good start. Keep it up author!

A very interesting read I must say. Story is developing in a good manner not so fast and not so slow. Author is doing a great job well thanks for the read.

Pretty generic wish fulfillment story, it’s not bad but it’s not good either. There are hundreds of novels on here that follow the same tropes in this story, although the grammar is pretty good for Webnovel

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What i can say this novel is best i hope you can finish this novel love from india. .. i want to request could you please write novel Overlord cross to tesura world .. . pretty please 🥺🥺🥺.. .

hey just don't drop it. It's really good to read a fanfic about this series with such a good development.

let's go. I don't know if this is what i wanted, but it is very good till now. so everyone just enjoy it. 👍👌

Loved the story so far! Definitely a recommended read

nice......................................

I'm quite enjoying this story so far. I haven't found any other fanfics for this story, so that in itself keeps it new and fresh. Add on the OC being a likable character that shows decisiveness and a proper amount of ambition, it really feels like a 'correction' to the original stories rather lame MC. His character is fairly fleshed out as well, not just being a rando reincarnator, but an actual person with a 'realistic' backstory that adds weight how he acts and responds to other people. Writing quality isn't perfect, but is fairly good overall.

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