Overweight Mage's Slice of Life

Author Here! ! ! I'll just be dropping a review here for the rating. I don't really know if this is to ypur liking, and I am not really good in advertising something, so just go down the comment if you want to ask something about the novel. I would also appreciate the nice gesture if you leave me a review and donate your powerstones. I am writing this after a week of uploading the story and I had not really received much of a feedback yet so anything would help.

Writing Quality - Its not the poetic style but dark mystery style. It has classic 3rd pov present tense. You get hooked to the dark atmosphere author created though. Story Development - With the initial chapter it's slow but buckle up this kight be a rollar coaster ride guys 😏. Character Design - I can't talk much about Carl right now except for the fact his eating habits are questionable and he is a candy. I meant he is handsome. Would love to read his next body. He seemed rather unfazed at times which showed how cold he can be. And definitely has some specific goals in mind. Updating stability - 5stars for this author don't be stressed quality over quantity World background - It has cultivation author has explained in details in the 1st two chapters. (Which I read, don't be lazy people.) Not to mention the novel is easy to understands. So get this Slice of life 🍕 before it runs out.

In this story, the main character is well written, his strong sides are weak, the hero interacts with the world from the first chapter and the author does not forget about the character's training and development. There is humor that does not repel, the story is easy to read and understand, a good transition from time to time and the combat is just as interestingly worked out. The history of the world is not presented immediately, but gradually the reader learns the motives of the protagonist and the world in which he finds himself. I hope the author will keep the speed of releasing chapters and we will be able to see what heights the main character will achieve. P.S It would not be bad if the main character combined some technique from where he came from with a technique that he learns where he came from.

Would have been 3 star but 1 star to try to cancel out authors server bs reviews where they just spam stuff

Although the beginning wasn't particularly captivating, you are left wanting more. I'm grateful you wrote this. well, these kinds of books aren't my cup of tea, but I can recommend them to someone else.

The first chapters of this story are engaging and intriguing. The author does an excellent job of building suspense and keeping the reader on the edge of their seat. The characters are well-developed and interesting, and their interactions with one another add depth and complexity to the story. The world-building in these chapters is also impressive. The author has created a fascinating and detailed universe, complete with its own rules, culture, and history. This attention to detail makes the story feel immersive and realistic, and adds to the overall enjoyment of reading it. The writing style is clear and easy to follow, and the pacing of the story is just right. There are enough twists and turns to keep the reader engaged, but not so many that the story becomes confusing or overwhelming.

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Interesting story title and book cover, I don't know why readers stopped? It's intriguing and good writing style...though i don't read this genre, I still recommend this new concept

Wow man you really put a lot of work into this and I can see it. Your strong point is definitely your attention to detail keep doing what yoir doing

First off, I love the title. Just a glance at it made me laugh. Overall it's an interesting read, and I recommend it to anyone out there also because it is a different approach to parallel world writings. The details captured are awesome as well. In short, I think it's great!

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I love how inclusive this is! It’s so realistic (other than the magic ofc!) and I love how the MC isn’t a “Attractive muscular blonde 6’0 beach body builder guy” it’s a different type of diversity I didn’t know I needed! Keep going!!! Much love, S.T <3

Great plot ! I like the writing style as well.Keep up ! Love it !

50 chapters in and it's an enjoyable read so far, there's a nice balance of screen time for both the MC and side/support characters, which brings the novel to life (hopefully it stays that way), give it 10 chapters before dropping it.

good novel, cant wair for the next update