cobra kai: The Prodigy

Grammar is horrid, would suggest an editor or an app to help. Character introduction isn't very creative or original. There's alot of "he did this and then he did that and then he got this". Break it out and go into it. Restart the character introduction by developing his personality traits and try to make sense of why he would do certain actions, instead of "He got really successful by himself really fast because he did this and this and this, then he met his dad and got angry with his mum and kicked his dad". Why would a lonely guy who reincarnates into a fictional world and got the ability to learn at an accelerated rate and became a self made millionaire have issues with his current absent parents?

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i am loving this book can't wait for more

I assure you, I'm not kidding around when I say that the writing is of such abysmal quality that it's truly, and I mean truly, causing me an excruciating headache; it's as if the words on the page have conspired to create a pounding, relentless discomfort in my head.

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Terrible story, barely legable and completely unbelievable.