If you like it then please leave a power stone and review guys........ If there are any mistakes in my translation, feel free to point them out and I'll fix them immediately.... Don't forget to leave a review guys ....
Didn't see any 1 star review but yeah. Don't bother, this is straight up MTL. Try fanfiction.net they have good stories.
This is appalling. Truly. Even if the Author doesn't know stuff, why not check rewrite them.
Its a good story, but not a good read.
Great book, I can see you have potential. I'm rooting for you bro.............................................................................
The typical Chinese novel: Gods, mc system puppet, unreal romance, mc seeks to feed his fragile ego, interactions without resemblance to the original and a protagonist with a terrible personality
The book is really good in the beginning but when you reach high up in the chapter They start bringing in their racism and hate for other countries and if you can't stomach it you'll just want to drop and worst of all the Original author (not the translator) made Gwen sound like a racist because they said she doesn't like black people but she is not racist (for christ sake she fell in love with miles morales a black spider man) Soo read at your own discretion. but don't be disheartened other from the racism everything else is good.
The writing is killing this funny story.
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Writing is horrible dude. Did you copy it from Chinese novel.
interesting and good overall but there are a few names and spelling issues other than that keep up the good work
copiar y pegar... ya ni le importa una demanda por derechos de autor... por que no sigues subiendo capitulos ???........................................
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It was a good start, but it started focusing too much on the side characters for no reason.
I like it very much. Keep up the work. 😃👍
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I just started this book and I already like it I hope you don't drop and keep up the good work
Keep up the good work!
Perfect work! I have no words to describe this great work! Greatly deserves more than 5 🌟 if it were up to me. I hope you continue this work, with at least 1 chapter a day.
