Biokinetic Ability in Dragon ball

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Harem stories in dragon ball are rare, so I'm looking forward to more, if I'm ever displeased I'll change this review as a warning.................

Many of the 2-star voters did not read the story until chapter 20 or 10. The problems have already been solved in general, so enjoy it~~ I started doing translations and corrections using chatgpt, so most if not all of the problems are likely already resolved. Enjoy~~

Though you have what could be a solid FF there is a few teething issues, mainly the flow of the story is a little off putting. PS. Bio-kinetic is about the manipulation of energy and not biology, either you have misunderstood the abilities or your title is wrong. If you need to know what Bio-kinetic is, search about Gambit from Marvel or Hisoka Morow from Hunter x Hunter. All the best.

The story is interesting, some people complain about the writing, but this story is readable, with an understandable story, I'll see how it develops in the future.

The story itself is very good, there are fan fics that start and I don't understand anything that's happening, it's already here to understand because it explains

bro this fanfic is lit.But pls continue iron man fanfiction

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more please, really good so far has great potential

Nice concept, I'll see where this goes!

This fanfic has an interesting concept but poor execution. As of chapter 5, the flow was too rigid and it wasn't easy to read, the grammar had plenty of mistakes, and the conversations felt like reading a diary. I'm not writing this to off put the author, I really appreciate his hard work. I'm just pointing out what I noticed in this fanfic in hope to encourage improvement.

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I'm confused why is there a same book? are they different?

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No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem!

Bro goki, kakarotta, really? Gaku or kakaratt sound much better, You a little bad with the names. . .

what happened I was reading it then the chapters are gone

why this story is dropped 😭😭😭😭..... .

hello author is this story dropped ? .