The book is good, not fantastic or anything but I still like it and will keep following it and read it as the chapters grow more and story takes off.
I believe despite some mistakes here and there, the book has good potential and can be read to pass some time, I believe author have a clear agenda in his mind.
I think it is good enough to be put on a collection, I believe with time and more chapters it will get more robust as a story. As these types of stories takes little bit of time to take off.
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