Finally! The 10th review! I'll take it for myself. Honest review from author-sama in the POV of a reader. Might be biased since I wrote it myself but imo, it's pretty good. Hope you read it! Thanks!
How lucky i am. Very Cool story I wonder will Sakura be in Naruto Harem.? Im sure Hinata will be his love interest thats is obvius.
Good novel and good plot if you like Naruto as a smart and strong ninja without any transmigration and reincarnation plot. Cheers.
Random lines of dialogue are in badly translated Japanese. Couldn't even get past the first chapter.
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Not bad version of naruto, very close to the canon so if that isnt your cup of tea maybe you wont like it but if it is then go right ahead and read it.
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i like almost everything other then haku
man this is best Naruto fanfic i have ever read and when i Say best it's not one of the best but best of the best it's like how orignal Naruto story should have how hiruzen should have treated him and how as a main character he should develop all in all it good.I .just want to ask will there be harem tho
Honestly it's a good fanfic ,but I think that naruto should learn to be humble just a little for character growth but that's just my opinion ,overall I really like it
it's basically boring without any plot it's wishfullment with arrogant MC with plot armor is everyone listen to him he doesn't even plan it he says it and everyone starts bowing to him basically the third hokage giving him flying thunder god just because he asks for it.
you tried but try improving on your translation
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Such a refreshing take on the series without any unreasonable diversions of the plot or unnecessary character deaths.. this is like a breath of fresh air. Love it
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Good job author please don't drop it!!!!
