Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnated with an Analysis system.

good start, but some scenes need to be delivered properly or they'll become lackluster. Like when Sato died for example and him undergoing transmigration. The end of the chapter even feels rushed. Try and add a few paragraphs to expand it and make it more detailed.

Welll... not a bad start. Could be better. For instance... the girl seemed to use her eye skill cast an explosion spell in mc location... why?. Was it intentional?.... at least he dosnt has to deal wirh bullies anymore.

Excellent chapter, looking forward to more.

Not bad at all. With a bit improvement, you can actually reach new heights sooner or later

Great start! Got me hooked on the story right from the beginning.

Cool

wow! this is a nice start. keep it up

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How is the siill he used to kill the reaper conceal?!?... its should be named Binding Drain or Draining Rope or something

Thanks for the chapter