Naruto: Shimura's Heir

Boys we need a petition for a Female Haku!

Shameless 5 star review as all authors should! Hello if you’re seeing this it’s either you have already read or are thinking of reading this Fanfic! I’m open to some ideas from random people about how the story should go but generally already got an idea on how to start the fic. Also yes the green haired guy on the fanfic is the MC! Picture is not owned by me idk where I got it tbh.

Okay I’ll preface this review by saying that the MC and plot are great so far and the chosen side characters are great as well. The writing quality is also great. I have only one issue with this story so far and it’s the MC’s choice of ninjutsu. Small spoiler here but giving the MC wind and lightning affinity and making his first elemental ninjustus water wall, water clone, great fireball, and earth wall is crazy to me as it waste tons of time and effort that could be spent on the things you have a talent for. It’s all well and good to “cover his weaknesses” but the truth is making your strengths stronger is way better in Naruto than branching out to much Garra and Lee are great examples of focusing on one’s strengths. Side note: if you have swift release then leaning how to slowly cast a wall you won’t even use is wild. Also thanks author excited to read more!

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very good so far! ~ keep up the great work, author-san.

Ok, being objective this Fanfic is very good, the character interactions are very good and everything, BUT there is always a BUT, the story is probably the slowest I've read in a Naruto Fanfic, I mean, 59 chapters and the mc He's still 6 years old, he's boring.

breath of fresh air in the naruto isekai novels. from the start it seems well written and interesting. i like that the mc (despite his family) is not some edge lord but also not a beta. he knows what he wants and acts to get it but also has friends around him to get help and keep him grounded. all in all with the update stability, i recommend this book👌👌

Wonderful book

Very solid, and certainly worth following. The authors writing style and grammar are reasonably good, which for webnovel means excellent. The story is easy to read and enjoyable. The MC has a cool skillset and does not appear to suffer from the typical brain damaged protagonis syndrome. I hope this story will continue and I can recommend it with confidence.

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The inner side comments are really cringey. This would've been nice if MC didn't have a hard on everytime he hears a familiar name.

Can wait for the next chapters .. .. . .

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Muy bien fanfic de Naruto me gusta como estas desarrollando la historia que no te estancas y los capítulos antes del canon no se se sienten como relleno además de muy buena la forma en que muestras su relación con Hinata

Olvide poner una calificación jaja. Por el momento voy por el capitulo 38 y no puedo parar de leerlo, me encanta la personalidad del MC y como interactúa con los demás personajes. Vi que alguien había escrito un comentario diciendo que el MC tenia complejo de Héroe, no se si comió setas radioactivas o algo por el estilo, o simplemente leyó otro Fic y lo confundió con este xD

Good book. Mc talent is explained and his power up isn’t without reason. No system, but signs of a growing harem so beware of your steps fellow fatties.

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