Don't go into this expecting the FL to be a Mary Sue. Yes, she is a hacker, a web novelist and a top student, but she doesn't have the Mary Sue character; she compromises with her family, she relies on outside help to get things done. She is, in other words, like a normal teenage trying to deal with the rubbish hand dealt her.
I admit that when I started reading this threw me off, but I appreciate that the FL is... normal.
The logic of the story (especially the ML going down the route of "she's not like other girls") is off (she MUST hide in his bedroom when there are other rooms in the house?) but I guess that's par for the course.
Overall, a lot better than the generic Mary Sue stories. Hope it gets picked.
