Comments of chapter undefined of God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.

The prologue is interesting bit the problem is that it's too long. It is well detailed but needs a little more life from my point of view

A lot of things right off the bat, noice.

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too long ,but has a nice ring to it

Thanks for the chap

Pretty good intro :)

I can feel the game vibes here! TES, Total War, and some mythological beasts. I imagine game scenery while reading

Fabulous 👌 👏 ,no words , descriptive.

Nice

Here is my honest review . i feel like the opening is too long and too detailed. Now don't get me wrong I enjoy how skilled you are as a writer and the background is amazingly deep. I just felt like you gave me too much of it all at once. I found myself wondering who was who by the end of it. It's easier for a reader like me to absorb the info if it's given to us in small pieces. when you just heap it on, it loses impact because we forget most of it. Now having said that i did actually enjoy the action that took place and think it's an interesting read.

Got to say one of the best intros to a series I've read. A lot of information put into a small amount of reading that is interesting and easy to remember, and feels like reading about the Greek or Roman myths.

I learnt something ... I need to read more cultivation.

prologue is interesting and good especially the backstory of the gods

Best start to a book I have read in a long time. I expect big things from this author.

This is the second part of the first chapter. The First part should be just above on the chapter list. For those who want to read this prologue, you can go check it out over there. This is to make the story more engaging etc... You get the gist 😉👍

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kinda don't know if I wanna continue. I just saw the tragedy tag. idk how I feel about that.

very interesting lore [img=thinking]

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