I hope you don’t forget that marceline needs to become a vampire for her immortality or else she will look old and wrinkly by the time finn is born like farmworld finn’s marceline.
well keep going because your doing great 👍 with the story and I hope you actually don't underestimate the knowledge of humanity because it's pretty OP if you mix it with magical technology in the future 😜
wow the last part really surprised me, is this because mc saw hierpohant as a secundary fictional character?? kinda hard to think mc still treat this as a game and not as his rela life when he literally saw a nuclear bomb almost destroy humanity. anyway really liked the chapter