pretty good chapter. one of the first ones that doesnt just kill the dude for what seems to be the sake of it. This has some general plot, the raindrops adds so much vividness and relates to us readers so well. and the death... is a good death, good description too
The MC rides the bus, not the taxi, to save money? What country are you from, author? Is this a usual thing to ride the taxi for school students in your country?