Comments of chapter undefined of Should I Become a Villain?

🥱🥱🥱🥱 His constant monologue is too boring, I almost literally fell asleep, so far the MC is average and doesn't stand out at all, his first action after coming back should have been kill all your enemies with time stopped and find a quiet place where you can grow comfortably. This current development is boring

i think the author should reread all his chapters till this one, there are times when the words written can be contradictory, which breaks the flow. starting from the beginning the author shows mc be friendly and when they made the move to kill him, his actions shows bewilderment, now that as built a foundation, after the friends showed wgy it was done, the mc now turned to someone that his playing a deep game whi knows what the government will might do.there is a way author can make this switch possible and smooth but it did not cut it in the first chapter, now also it was said he just got a new technique that the mc just got so the government did not know, then it changed to he has gotten the technique earlier before others... i hope the author sees this switch of things breaking a readers flow. i will keep on reading though.