I really like the start and the concept, I'll just rate 5 stars and see where you'll go with this. Remember that you can't please anyone so there's bound to be some hate in the future. Good luck and have fan writing.
*Filler*
apology for poor england
when were you when queen elizibith dies?
i was sat at home eating beans on toast when telly ring
‘queen is kill’
‘no’