Writing Quality 4/5: There are minor grammar mistakes, but they are very miniscule.Story Development 4/5: Personally, until we reach the Draconic Ruins Realm, then I doubt that the path would diverge too much from TDG's plot.Character Design 4/5: Fairly intelligent. Too slow of a cultivation though. I also wished he was more cunning.Updating Stability 4/5: This is based on how your updates back then.World Background 4/5: I normally score TDG fanfics with 3/5-stars since they don't really delve into world-building. However, you added your own flare into this and it's decent.