[Reviewed on: 12-09-22]
[Reading status: 3 chapters]
[Reviewer: aysel inara]
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REMARKS:
- Cover is so pretty, title is direct and catchy. I see no reason why no one wouldn't click on the book. The synopsis is pretty decent too.
- Talking about chapter 1, I personally and honestly had mixed remarks seeing first paragraph but then right after passing through the para it was just 'wow.' Not saying that the opening para was bad, it's just me. I'm certain.
- Now let me praise the naming scheme, Domhall is a catchy name. Although i don't really have an explanation of why it intrigued me. Haha.
- The eclipse and being transmigrated or teleported [still ain't sure] was a unique element i'd say. I have never seen anyone using eclipse as plot progression. 10 points from me here.
- The character of Domhall resembled Lucifer in many ways, and i think he was inspiration of crafting Domhall. Not sure. But it's a good thing, at least for me. Not to forget females were/are crazy about that show.
- Chapter 1 was well paced, not so fast, not so slow. i liked how it ended and how the foreshadowing was done with that feet frozen scene. Loved it.
- The character of FL is another good thing I loved, it was crafted with a homework i'd say. It was great and the way she was shown with two different aspect was a good thing. It is still unclear whether she knows Domhall or not, as per the last words in chapter 3.
- The imagery is another strong point of author, every scene can be visualized without any obstruction. The inferno and where Domhall wakes up, the bar, the freezing feet scene, the mysterious voice etc.
- I personally loved the book and have well wishes for the contract and the earning. The book deserves attention.
