I have read your other fan fic of Harry Potter, so while this is 'new' but other than start wher he get mixed with new character but following story was just same upto when instead of Hermione, Draco also came along. And also him not joining other school like Salem University, then things start getting a new turn which is good đ But I think you should focus more on Snape points of view and last few chapter felt like dragging for example one full chapter earlier was of Hermione and Draco getting there house selected it could have been done with a paragraph instead of chap it felt like milking it. And I feel happy that you started writing again đ