Paulo_D_Manoel
Will his burned skin heal completely and will his hair grow back cuz I think he should be in top form, I won't say I didn't enjoy the todoroki fight but I feel ur nerfing him, note this is just my opinion and friendly advice, with his speed from soru and powerful body which from what I've been reading is a low level one piece body but still powerful in the mha verse he should have been able to easily defeat todoroki, I get that u wanted to highlight his martial but I don't know how to explain it although the fight was good it just left a bad taste, but the chapter was good, I just think ur focusing too much on his martial arts and leaving out the strength on his actual body and it's getting confusing knowing his body's strength. Not criticizing just stating my opinion, I enjoy this and think it's great
Only problem I had on last chap was when MC just kinda fell off the ring, it was anti-climatic and I felt like the whole tournament was pretty pointless, I get MC focuses on the fight too much but I felt like it wasn't necessary or as if there was even a reason for it, maybe if he'd gotten the news of his father first and wasn't in his zone and then messed up it'd have been more reasonable, but since it wasn't it just felt like you forced his loss for some plot reason. Anyways I'm still enjoying your fanfic. Nice chapter!