Comments of chapter undefined of The Endless Run

This reads like a summary on the back of a book, you have to fix that, it only serves to info dump on the reader, in probably the worst way. You also need to format your paragraphs and leave spaces, right now everything is just one big brick wall of text. Very difficult to read. Your tenses are switching back and forth also, stick to one tense. I can tell you were excited to write this, that's a good thing. But now you have to buckle done and learn to perfect your craft.

nice👌

well done. nice idea keep going. one day you will succeed

you nice keep going 🙂