( ENGLISH BOOK) MR. WILLIEM

The writing quality is quite interesting, it's just that some parts need to be improved. character design is quite good but it would be even better if some revisions were made. the content of the story is interesting and indeed only a few readers are allowed to read this book. all good and good luck for the future!

this story is good for readers who really like the dark world and some kind of blood, murder and cunning. it should be age limit because this book is not recommended for certain ages

William looks very sadistic with his tough nature and supportive body shape if he deserves to be called a cruel man. This story is very good and I am waiting for every part that is published

here I only comment on the character design section, it would be nice for each character to be highlighted more about their character and nature. that's all the rest this story is good and interesting

igo nga makapabugnaw kung magbasa. usa ka grupo sa mga tawo nga giuhaw sa dugo? inhuman kaayo sa tinuod pero ang nature sa story sa kada part na curious ko nga maghulat sa continuation

go leor chun chills a dhéanamh agus tú ag léamh. grúpa daoine tart fola? an-mhídhaonna i ndáiríre ach nádúr an scéil i ngach cuid a chuireann sé aisteach orm a bheith ag tnúth leis an leanúint ar aghaidh

dovoljno da se naježiš pri čitanju. skupina ljudi žednih krvi? zapravo vrlo neljudski, ali priroda priče u svakom dijelu čini me radoznalim da iščekujem nastavak

suficient per fer calfreds en llegir. un grup de gent assedegada de sang? De fet, molt inhumà, però la naturalesa de la història a cada part em fa curiós esperar la continuació.

sufiĉe por fari frostotremojn dum legado. grupo da homoj soifantaj je sango? tre malhoma fakte sed la naturo de la rakonto en ĉiu parto kiu scivolas min atendi la daŭrigon.

enough to make chills when reading. a group of people thirsting for blood? very inhuman actually but the nature of the story in each part that makes me curious to look forward to the continuation