Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Becoming the strongest pirate (COMPLETED)

Honestly I’m not even angry that you killed Luffy and the gang but excited about what to come and the fights

Good Riddens, finally now all those that are left was Shanks and BlackBeard and Imu

Don't let Luffy's fanboy comments get you down, you're one of the few who risk killing the protagonists, and with that you're already innovating a lot. I love it <3 (google translate)

We all love Luffy's crew, but in this fanfic it was good to show who the real protagonist is.

Good, now kidnap the Robin and go to Laugh Tale.

It takes real balls to kill off the main character and the supporting characters like this. Not gonna say I liked it, but I respect the author for trying something like this.

I'm too excited man please drop another chapter🙏

i think you should upgrade ashen's df, as stated by vegapunk it is imaginary which means he can make more of it than the others as an other worlder, plus maybe add something like devil fruit mastered, I mean when I think about it the term awakening is like a beginning of something more, just my idea tho. btw nice chapter!

The most exciting certainly was the death of nami hahahahahhaha

This honestly was amazing ashen proved he is a true protagonist & main character rn hope he gets a lil upgrade in the df like Vega punk said its all imaginery

nice chap dont let comments get to ya

thanks for the chapter

this was the peak of this fanfic

pls make ashen and crew to danmachi

It's was hard to read, but at the same time I loved the chapter.

Thxs for the chap

You know what's a good story idea turn luffy into a Regressor after this story is finished like start from ashen killing him and luffy going back in time to the start of his journey

TFTC!