Comments of chapter undefined of Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!
Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!
Emmanuel_Peter203
Chapter comments6
😒😒too many panel-repetative things to complete word count ☹️.... author ..i really like this novel as i am changing my ids to read the chapters...3~4 chapters per id...but by showing these repetative things....just word count is increasing ☹️☹️
Nah it's okay I honestly really appreciate the comments and your thoughts and most importantly, Thank you for reading the novel and I hope you and I continue this journey and see where it will take us
Fallen_Asura:thanks for responding ...as for the novel... though the concept is not new...but the execution is good...just removing repetedness will make the novel more immersive😄...as for adding other things to the novel...i will leave that to you..am just a reader, not a writer 🙂...and i will not leave the novel...just wait for the next day..if i don't have more free passes 😐...sorry if my previous comment hurt you 🥺...as for the power stone...i am giving them to you as i am changing my ids 😄...so just continue to write more 👍
Author, first 1/3 of this chapter seems repetitive and lengthy in a monolog. Him recounting the whole incident just to explain how she is brave could be surmised into a few sentences such as "The requirements for that class is to he brave. She definitely is recounting to her actions to finish off the Serpent." His constant monologuing really is boring as it draws away from the story progression. Especially if he is constantly referring to how he doesn't have emotions and doesn't know anything.